PRAYER
Be anything everything but not gone I wake up to this this this name no name you not you an aborted embryo of a thought in the coffin of my mind mind mind mine minefield field f d g k t sh consonants with no vowels a gasp of air air eh aaaaa ahhh ahh ah in a vacuum your mouth opens wide like a great misshapen flower and all that comes out is ah – eh –
word bubbles dis
sol
ving into e m
p t y s p a c e
and all that’s left is
a f t e r t h
o u g ht
f a
d i n g a f t e r i
m a g e
dis si pated sm oke from the last put
put
put
of dwarf
fireworks
10 comments:
Wow! That leaves me gasping for air, also!
How did you do the formatting? I always struggle to get my html/css accepted... ;)
Hi there! Thank you for reading the Experiment!
Yes, the formatting is a little bit insane, it took a while to get it how I wanted it. I usually write everything out in a word processor first, and then I'll cut and paste. And *then* I'll go in and manually tweak everything on preview until it's the way I wanted it.
I'm sure there's a way to do it that's a lot faster, but so far, I haven't found it (I can do basic HTML coding, but that's about it sadly!) G'luck and I hope you do find a better way to do it!
Really wow!
Yes, seriously, WOW!
Paeansunplugged and Elizabeth, thank you so much! Prompts = experiments; I don't normally write in this style, but any stretch is a good stretch. So glad it resonates!
Fantastic! I adored this!
Thank you so much Jenni! Glad you enjoyed the Experiment and thank you for visiting!
Good one! Line breaks are always interesting and you really took it to another level.
Thank you Linda! It was definitely an experiment I'd like to do more of!
amazing lines and composition
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