The sun can’t rise in the west
A circle can’t have corners
Pigs can’t fly
The clock can’t strike thirteen
The stars cannot rearrange themselves in the sky
A mouse can’t eat an elephant.
Still catching up. The one that first caught my attention was 'A mouse can't eat an elephant', since I'd done the elephant previously. On second reading though, 'A circle can't have corners' started waving at me, and then settled in my brain to percolate, which led to thoughts of how glass blowers start with a round blob of glass, then press it into a mould that shapes it into something which could have angles. Which in turn led to serious problem solving of how a circle could still maintain itself as a circle but still have corners, and then everything sort of snowballed and here we are.
I'm not very happy with this, it feels lacking, but in the interests of catch up, it still gets posted.
I'm not very happy with this, it feels lacking, but in the interests of catch up, it still gets posted.
PERFECT
The ring is a symbol of constant faith and
abiding love
Precious as its material, a perfect circle with
no end.
She felt
its unfamiliar curve, cool as a damp leaf
As it
slid onto the fourth finger of her left hand
Never dreaming
that it would grow and swallow her whole
Until
she was trapped within its golden arc
Or that
he would force her into the narrow angles
Of his
ideals - of love, of her.
Everywhere
she looked there were shadows
Cast
across the endless circle of her being
Corners
where monsters came to hide and ghosts
Rose from
the grave.
2 comments:
I like it. I think it's the last line that makes it, turns the circle into a trap.
Thank you Jane! It was a bit of a headscratcher to write at first, honestly - but I'm going to put that down to a full day of travel, work-related worries, and brain not working. I'm glad you like it - the circle is indeed a trap. Full of odd non-Euclidean angles and corners and such.
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