As much as I've been wanting to write the last few days, life has gotten in the way with a vengeance - and with it the discouragement that comes with being so behind there's no earthly way of catching up. However, today's prompt reminded me of something I wrote a little while ago, so while it's technically cheating, it's still about a fruit, and it's still something up where there wasn't any five minutes ago, so even if it doesn't count, maybe it'll serve as inspiration for later, if life doesn't get in the damn way YET AGAIN...
POMEGRANATE
LOVE
My father's love is a big round pomegranate on the
table after lunch.
For you, he says.
For you, he says.
Two simple words which over forty years of troubled
relations
hard work, and difficult love have polished to burnished gold sheen
wrapped about with the decades-old memory of a wayward daughter
hard work, and difficult love have polished to burnished gold sheen
wrapped about with the decades-old memory of a wayward daughter
eating
pomegranates in Virginia declaring that of all things
she loved this fruit the best.
Yellow-streaked red. This pomegranate is heavy in my palm,
not
quite as vivid as other pomegranates I have known but when I cut it apart
the thin red juice spurting from bruised sacs is sweet as honey.
quite as vivid as other pomegranates I have known but when I cut it apart
the thin red juice spurting from bruised sacs is sweet as honey.
Pale pinkish-and-red. Endothelium cells, contained
by yellow membranes
thin as onion skin. Breaking them apart is like dissecting a body's secrets,
detaching each plump, ripe sac from the finger-clutch of its yellow moorings
holding everything tight against smooth pomegranate peel
like flesh contained by its epidermis.
thin as onion skin. Breaking them apart is like dissecting a body's secrets,
detaching each plump, ripe sac from the finger-clutch of its yellow moorings
holding everything tight against smooth pomegranate peel
like flesh contained by its epidermis.
I stand at the sink, deseeding love that falls in tiny scarlet
jewels -
pomegranate seeds, bleeding memory and the remembrance of things lost
and things gained, hope and the fear of things to come
thin pale-blood juice staining my fingers and the cutting board
with winter-sweet promise.
pomegranate seeds, bleeding memory and the remembrance of things lost
and things gained, hope and the fear of things to come
thin pale-blood juice staining my fingers and the cutting board
with winter-sweet promise.
Tomorrow is tomorrow. Today, there are pomegranates
and my father, the kitchen god, storing up scents and conversation
like ribbons to tie around the next pomegranate
the next memento of unspoken love.
and my father, the kitchen god, storing up scents and conversation
like ribbons to tie around the next pomegranate
the next memento of unspoken love.
7 comments:
Let me be honest! My eyes are brimming with emotions the moment I finished reading this beautiful, heartfelt, poignant poem. It is not only a poem but a diary of love, loss, loneliness, and many sweet and bitter memories. I loved every line! Thank you, Shuku for a jewel of a poem. Pomegranate it is! :) <3
Oh Sunita, what a lovely comment. Thank you so much! My father and I share a great love for food, and during some of our most difficult times, we've managed to bond over things to eat. Pomegranates, and mangoes, for us both!
I love how so many of your images speak to the complexity of the relationship. Like this one: "the thin red juice spurting from bruised sacs is sweet as honey." Bruised yet sweet. Thin yet honey (which is thick). You hold a whole lot of meaning in a few words, and in the compact pomegranate and its multitude of tiny seeds. The pomegranate has a lot of internal complexity in its structure, so it's perfect! Hope you don't mind, I will copy-paste this comment to napowrimo to hopefully entice more people to read your lovely poem.
(Interesting - Blogger knows what I looked like in 2009 😂)
Alana! <3 Thank you so much for reading, and oh yes, please do post away! You give the loveliest, most meaningful comments always, and they always cheer me up!
Complicated relationships between parents and children--they keep us writing, making art, and going to therapy, don't they? Love the sensual description of taking apart the pomegranate.😍 I'm also moved by the speaker's wisdom. 'Tomorrow is tomorrow.' That whole last stanza is filled with peace at the end of a less than peaceful poem.
"I stand at the sink, deseeding love that falls in tiny scarlet jewels -
pomegranate seeds, bleeding memory and the remembrance of things lost"
Now THAT is a jewel, Shuku! A precious wonderous gorgeous jewel of a keeper.
Thank you.
Our relationships are so complicated...just to be in the present moment is often more tan we can bear. The fruit acts as a bridge.
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