Thursday, April 06, 2023

NaPoWriMo 2023 Day 5: Lullaby

Today's prompt...hit a little too close to home. I still don't know if I should have posted this or not, mostly because I'm not happy with it, but also because it's...sensitive subject matter. Here is it anyway. 


Prompt: Finally, here’s our (optional) prompt for the day. Begin by reading Charles Simic’s poem “The Melon.” It would be easy to call the poem dark, but as they say, if you didn’t have darkness, you wouldn’t know what light is. Or vice versa. The poem illuminates the juxtaposition between grief and joy, sorrow and reprieve. For today’s challenge, write a poem in which laughter comes at what might otherwise seem an inappropriate moment – or one that the poem invites the reader to think of as inappropriate.

LULLABY

The roses outside the window
dip and judder like the rise and fall
of her voice as she sings Rosie, Rosie
Ring a ring of Rosies, a pocketful of
Posies, deft hands smoothing the folds
of the white lawn christening dress her sister
embroidered with scarlet rosebuds on the
hem and bodice, bright as blood.
Rosie my darling you'll look beautiful
she croons. Her smile is a white flag
crisp as the dress she readies
for the daughter she will birth 
tomorrow -
a mother who will age and fade
with the years like falling petals
and her child (27 weeks, stillborn)
who never will. 


Tuesday, April 04, 2023

NaPoWriMo 2023 Day 3: Complex Conjugates

For once today I didn't feel as if I was about to die from trying to poem, which is good! The prompt was actually rather enjoyable, which is also good (after translating some of the worst-written webnovel chapters in the world, my brain has ceased to function in any capacity except as a pile of quivering tapioca goop.)

PromptFind a shortish poem that you like, and rewrite each line, replacing each word (or as many words as you can) with words that mean the opposite.

The poem I decided to modify was Vijay Seshadri's beautifully-written "Imaginary Number." I almost feel bad I modified it, because it's really such a wonderful piece! I had to look up mathematical terms (it's been ages since I touched any advanced math) but I count that as 'fascinating research.'

Imaginary Number
Vijay Seshadri
 
The mountain that remains when the universe is destroyed
is not big and is not small.
Big and small are
 
comparative categories, and to what
could the mountain that remains when the universe is destroyed
be compared?
 
Consciousness observes and is appeased.
The soul scrambles across the screes.
The soul,
 
like the square root of minus 1,
is an impossibility that has its uses.

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And here is mine!

Complex Conjugates

   The mountain that vanishes when the universe is reborn
is not microscopic and is not megalithic.
Microscopic and megalithic are
 
not comparative collectives, and to what
could the mountain that vanishes when the universe is reborn
be compared?
 
The subconscious closes its eyes, unappeased.
The body sloths under the rock shards and broken pebbles.
The body,
 
unlike the perfect square of 1,
is a possibility that is perfectly useless here.


Monday, April 03, 2023

NaPoWriMo Day 2: Love Song of the Modern Scientist Fascinated By Alchemy


I ended up with a migraine last night after finishing the last performance of five symphonic rock shows my community choir was doing last week, so I finished the poem today instead. I'm late, but at least I tried?

Prompt: Pick words from a given list, write a question for each word, then a one-line answer, and arrange the answers into a poem.


LOVE SONG OF THE MODERN SCIENTIST FASCINATED BY ALCHEMY

Where the Oracle spreads her wings
As high as Jupiter arcs over Mars
Night's softness and menace distilled.
One eye blind to the world and third eye for you
This is the sound of my heart cracking.
You potassium-blowdart into my heart-water
Together we are powerful: a caustic base.
Must I store you in rice to keep your scent eternal?
Your invisible bone-fingers stop my mouth
Crucifix-crimson terminal clusters like alveolae.

Sunday, April 02, 2023

NaPoWriMo 2023 Day 1: A Treatise on Adulteration of Food and Culinary Poisons

I have no idea if I'll make it through this year's NaPoWriMo or not, given last year's utter failure to do so thanks to Covid. But I'll give it a shot since I promised my amazing friend Gloria that I would try! I am so rusty though. This...is not the greatest anything; I cringe reading it, but it's a start?

PromptTake a look through Public Domain Review’s article on “The Art of Book Covers.” Some of the featured covers are beautiful. Some are distressing. Some are just plain weird (I’m looking at you, “Mr Sweet Potatoes”). With any luck, one or more of these will catch your fancy, and open your mind to some poetic insights.


A TREATISE ON THE ADULTERATION OF FOOD AND CULINARY POISONS

From Merriam-Webster's dictionary:
Adulterate: adul· ter· ate / ə-ˈdəl-tə-ˌrāt 
Transitive verb: To corrupt, debase, or make impure by the addition
of a foreign or inferior substance or element
Especially: to prepare for sale by replacing more valuable
with less valuable or inert ingredients
 
A drop here. A drop there.
A word here. A word there.
Summer-swinging pink-ribbon girl, now adult
Feeding on food laced with arsenic words. She's a humming bird
Drawing poisoned nectar from flowers
Planted in toxic soil. She's vintage brandy
Adulterated with cheap-liquor lies drop by drop
Until she believes she is water.
(Adulterate: To corrupt, debase, or make impure by the addition
of a foreign or inferior substance or element)

She looks in the mirror with no fight left
Survival instincts forced dormant.
A steady diet of gaslighting and toxic words
Keeps her believing she's an inferior element
The adulterated adult, damaged goods
A corrupted, debased, impure failure.
(Adulterate, also: to prepare for sale by replacing more valuable
with less valuable or inert ingredients)
 
The art of culinary poison isn't hard. 
All it takes is the right food, the right time
A drop here. A drop there.
A word here. A word there