tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6161549.post5767356448209723994..comments2023-10-30T18:49:00.753+08:00Comments on The Great Unknown: GloPoWriMo Day 17: The Bones SpeakShukuhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11258042395311417934noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6161549.post-22965098735573912182019-05-01T14:12:02.734+08:002019-05-01T14:12:02.734+08:00Shuku, This is a fascinating topic. The bones, our...Shuku, This is a fascinating topic. The bones, our internal recording mechanism - a tachograph of sorts. Like the poem a lot - thought provoking. Will carry this idea in my head for quite some time. LA Westhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11643995857662403352noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6161549.post-60630438413940146712019-04-19T02:15:19.242+08:002019-04-19T02:15:19.242+08:00The depth of this grim, unblinking tale is as unse...The depth of this grim, unblinking tale is as unsettling as it is impressive. Strong work. The Bizzahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17797871556831556557noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6161549.post-33529791606338603942019-04-18T15:04:40.039+08:002019-04-18T15:04:40.039+08:00a grizzly light to read by
this poem cuts to the b...a grizzly light to read by<br />this poem cuts to the bone<br />well done, Shukuerbiage.wordpress.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16613166276535753765noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6161549.post-8965517481471754942019-04-18T10:03:25.260+08:002019-04-18T10:03:25.260+08:00What lies beneath the mask...often never revealed ...What lies beneath the mask...often never revealed in life in so many ways. This is a wonderful rendering through the images of the most permanent of what we leave behind.Kerfehttps://methodtwomadness.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6161549.post-43731795416250503082019-04-18T09:11:18.630+08:002019-04-18T09:11:18.630+08:00I was a little apprehensive to open up the link wh...I was a little apprehensive to open up the link when I read the words ' violent' and 'morbid' but I'm glad I mustered the courage. This is a great take on the prompt. And it's just very sad. Beautiful poem. Smithahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00692623891128389805noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6161549.post-23124045907657382482019-04-18T01:36:26.041+08:002019-04-18T01:36:26.041+08:00Thank you so much Merril! Yes, that was something ...Thank you so much Merril! Yes, that was something I kept thinking about when I was doing that forensics class. Bones speak a very distinct and unique language. It's all there, if only we know how to read the signs. Shukuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11258042395311417934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6161549.post-15931599465197868762019-04-18T01:18:26.860+08:002019-04-18T01:18:26.860+08:00I like this, too. I think it's more sad than m...I like this, too. I think it's more sad than morbid. The poor woman who kept this secret--but it is revealed in the bones.<br />I like the idea of them "speaking," but someone has to learn their language.Merril D. Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07208799388236948565noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6161549.post-53024840766614478912019-04-18T00:24:56.537+08:002019-04-18T00:24:56.537+08:00Sunita: Thank you so much! Yes - yes that was what...Sunita: Thank you so much! Yes - yes that was what was in my mind too. It's always covered up somehow, by okays and I'm fines.<br /><br />Jane: Thank you! It really does linger...it's astonishing. The bones don't lie.Shukuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11258042395311417934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6161549.post-44470512880164074442019-04-18T00:16:14.384+08:002019-04-18T00:16:14.384+08:00The bones don't lie. I like this one. Not morb...The bones don't lie. I like this one. Not morbid, it just takes violence to a different metaphysical level. The idea of the evidence lingering in the bones is a great one, like blood screaming out. Shakespearean :)Jane Doughertyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14700193165487305298noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6161549.post-55732172812101175502019-04-18T00:11:10.154+08:002019-04-18T00:11:10.154+08:00Strong and powerful. I was relating the poem to do...Strong and powerful. I was relating the poem to domestic violence and how many women have these hidden and broken marks.Sunitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08770605152492469334noreply@blogger.com